Its definitely not boring to watch, Try a faster frame rate to increase the overall awesome factor. Then just some technical things here and there like the background stretching and camera movement.
Dont worry man the next episode will be smooth!
alright, spreading wings. A few things though.
Ok so its nice to see your skillz being used somewhere else. I enjoyed it but I had a few time where i wished you wouldnt do what I saw. First off, your skewing. Skewing is nice but it must be fluid, and to make it fluid it has to be rather brief. Theres too much skew and its too obvious. (one of the downfalls of slow motion but ill get to that in a bit.) My advice when u plan on skewing in a slow motion scene ease up on the gas a bit. not so much that you drop the skew all together but just not too much. Second, the slow motion. Everything looks better in slow motion, but too much slow motion can only get so far. Doing it on every signature move can be fun, but when I see it as many times as I saw it here It takes away my excitement for the movie. because if I really think about it I can have to guys do 5 moves only and stretch it out to a minute. So to solve that problem, put in som fast movement scenes that are hard to follow then FOLLOW UP with a slow mo. Its a nifty combination that every one loves but not too much of it. Third, the choreography. Decent to say the least and theres not many problems there. but what I wanna see more of is clean dodges and counter attacks. Now my favorite part was the dialog, nice and enjoyable to read. also the ending was rather...... hm.... yeah Ill find a word for it eventually lolz. So good job, 7 and a half cuz theres no half ratings here. And this is probably the longest review ive ever given so yeah.
Yes, i know. And i`m really glad you are once more proud, master. :P
The skewing.. let`s see. Everyone seems to complain about that as well. I really don`t see where the skewing is off. The slow mos... i was practicing that and that is why i did it so many times. That and the afterimages. And when i focus on Coreography, yes, you`ll see what you want. And the ending is kinda random. I always wanted to end it up like that :D And thanks for reviewing.
Ah and i have an average of 7.7 :3 so there was judging by halves or 10ths.
And what dialogue?! If you mean by the signature moves... thats merely text at all.
YES YES YES
A MILLION TIMES YES! THATS IT, THATS WHAT IM TALKIN ABOUT!
Epic! Thanks for reviewing!
BUTTONS!!! YES!!! Ok great, and i am liking the reviews on here very nice my friend keep it up! Wonder if ill get the same boom when i start my series eh?
You already have started series, Luffy vs Kirby remember?
And i dont know my friend, depends on how much effort you had put into your stuff.
Ok heres what to do...
Alright I think you should start adding buttons to youre txt boxes. That way you wont waste tweens and fading trying to guess how long the viewer will read. Email me saturday i should have an answer for you by then. Then the ppl here will have something else to complain about other than youre font issues.
...Ok thanks... I guess...
I liked it. considerably better than the first episode. Im not sure whats wrong with youre sound timing but u gotta figure that out. Action was pretty solid, love the new text boxes too. And love some of the effect placement. All in all you got a 6 cuz of the sound timing. As youre teacher i expect you to do even better.
dude...one question, how the hell did he even get up there?
THE EVIL INTERGALACTIC GOBLIN, GRIM SQUIDGE, IS IMPRISONING THE STARS...
...AND SCATTERING THEM ACROSS THE FARAWAY WORLDS. THE FIEND!
that was supah original bro. loved it.
no words can do justice...
..................i cant say nething....the epicness..........has silenced me...
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